For most of the twentieth century, inspecting a bridge, a pipeline, or the inside of a factory boiler meant sending a trained worker into a tight, often dangerous space. Bridge inspectors were lowered on ropes to examine support cables. Pipeline workers crawled through narrow tunnels with flashlights, checking for cracks or corrosion. Boiler inspectors waited for machinery to cool completely before climbing inside, sometimes losing days of production time in the process. The work was necessary, but it was slow, costly, and physically risky.
Beginning in the 1990s, a new option became available: remote-operated inspection tools. Small wheeled or flying robots, equipped with cameras and sensors, could travel into spaces too small or too hazardous for a person. A drone could fly along the underside of a bridge in an afternoon, a task that once took a three-person crew several days. A robotic crawler could move through a pipeline while gas was still flowing, eliminating the need to shut down operations. These tools did not eliminate the need for skilled inspectors; rather, they changed what the job looked like. Instead of climbing into the boiler, an inspector might sit at a monitor, guiding a small robot and analyzing the images it sent back.
The shift created new demands on the workforce. Companies needed inspectors who understood structural engineering and corrosion patterns, but who could also operate cameras, read sensor data, and troubleshoot when a robot's signal failed. Training programs that once focused almost entirely on physical techniques, such as how to rig a harness safely, began adding courses on remote-sensing equipment and basic robotics. Some experienced inspectors who had spent decades doing hands-on work resisted the change at first, arguing that no camera could replace the judgment of a hand run along a suspicious weld. Industry data, however, showed that remote inspection caught certain types of hairline cracks more reliably than the human eye alone, because sensors could detect temperature differences invisible to a visual check.
By the 2010s, most large infrastructure projects required at least some remote inspection as a standard part of routine maintenance. The technology did not replace inspectors; it gave them a new set of tools and, in many cases, kept them out of genuinely dangerous situations. For workers entering the field today, comfort with both traditional inspection skills and remote technology is no longer optional. It is the baseline expectation for the job, and that expectation is likely to keep rising as the tools themselves continue to improve.
1. According to the passage, what was one major drawback of traditional, in-person inspection methods?
2. Which detail from the passage best supports the idea that remote inspection tools can outperform human inspectors in some situations?
3. What is the most likely reason the author includes the detail about experienced inspectors resisting the new technology?
4. Based on the passage, how did the role of a pipeline inspector most likely change with the introduction of robotic crawlers?
5. Which statement best expresses the main idea of the passage?
6. As used in paragraph 3, what does the word "baseline" most nearly mean in the final paragraph's context?
Hiring managers disagree sharply about whether cover letters still serve a purpose. Supporters argue that a cover letter reveals things a resume cannot: how clearly a candidate writes, how well they tailor their interest to a specific role, and whether they can explain a gap or transition in their work history. A well-written cover letter, they argue, takes real effort, and that effort itself signals genuine interest in the position rather than a candidate blasting out the same resume to fifty different companies.
Critics respond that cover letters mostly measure something irrelevant to job performance: a person's comfort with a specific, somewhat old-fashioned writing format. A skilled welder, machinist, or warehouse supervisor may be excellent at their job and terrible at composing formal business prose, especially if English is not their first language or if they simply have not written this kind of document before. Critics also point out that many cover letters are now generated with the help of artificial intelligence tools, which undermines the claim that the letter reveals genuine effort or personal voice. If a hiring manager cannot tell whether a human or a chatbot wrote the letter, the argument that it proves "real effort" becomes much weaker.
A middle position has emerged at some companies: making the cover letter optional, but reviewing it carefully when one is submitted. This approach lets candidates who write well showcase that skill, without penalizing candidates whose strengths lie elsewhere. Data from a handful of companies that switched to optional cover letters showed little change in the quality of new hires, though the sample sizes were small and the companies that tried this approach may not be representative of employers generally.
Behind the debate is a larger question about what hiring is supposed to measure in the first place. If a job requires strong writing skills, a cover letter is a reasonable test of that skill. If a job does not require writing, requiring a cover letter anyway may filter out strong candidates for reasons that have nothing to do with whether they can do the work.
Some career counselors have begun advising job seekers to ask, before applying, whether the role itself involves regular written communication. If it does, they suggest treating the cover letter as a genuine writing sample worth the extra time. If it does not, they recommend keeping the letter brief and functional rather than polished, on the theory that a short, clear letter signals respect for the hiring manager's time without pretending the document is the centerpiece of the application. Neither approach guarantees a job offer, but both treat the cover letter as a tool suited to a specific purpose, rather than as a universal requirement that means the same thing in every hiring context.
7. Which sentence from the passage is a claim made by supporters of cover letters, rather than a fact stated by the author?
8. What evidence do critics use to challenge the claim that cover letters show "genuine effort"?
9. Which detail most weakens the strength of the evidence about companies that made cover letters optional?
10. Based on the passage, which job would the author's final argument suggest is LEAST in need of a cover letter requirement?
11. What is the primary purpose of this passage?
12. Which statement is an opinion rather than a fact stated in the passage?
Marisol had taken the same bus route for eleven years, and she could have drawn the stops from memory: the laundromat, the boarded-up diner, the church with the crooked steeple, the school where her daughter now worked as a teacher's aide. Tonight, though, the bus turned left where it should have turned right, and a recorded voice announced a detour for road construction. A ripple of irritation moved through the other passengers -- sighs, a muttered complaint, someone checking a phone for the time.
Marisol did not sigh. She watched the unfamiliar streets slide past the window: a mural she had never noticed, painted across the side of a hardware store; a small park with a fountain that wasn't running; a bakery with its lights still on, flour dust visible on the windows even from the street. She thought about how many times she had taken this exact route without really looking at anything beyond the next stop, the next transfer, the next thing she had to do.
When she was younger, she had wanted to be the kind of person who noticed things -- who could describe a stranger's coat or the exact color of the sky and make it sound like it mattered. Somewhere in the last decade, between two jobs and a daughter to raise alone, that version of herself had quietly gone missing, the way a coat left in a closet is technically still there but might as well not exist.
The bus lurched around a final turn and rejoined its normal route, the church with the crooked steeple rising up ahead, familiar and unremarkable. Marisol almost laughed. Eleven years of the same stops, and it had taken a five-minute detour to remind her that there were still things worth looking at, if she bothered to look. She did not know if she would remember this feeling tomorrow, on the ordinary ride home. But for tonight, at least, she had noticed the mural, the still fountain, the flour dust on the bakery window -- and that, she decided, was not nothing.
When she stepped off at her usual stop, she found herself walking a little slower than she normally did, glancing at the front of the laundromat, the boarded-up diner, the school where her daughter worked -- buildings she had passed thousands of times without truly seeing. None of it looked new. But for the length of the walk home, she let herself look anyway, the way she used to, back when noticing things had still felt like part of who she was.
13. How do most other passengers react to the detour, based on the passage?
14. What does the comparison to "a coat left in a closet" mean in the context of paragraph 3?
15. What is the most likely reason the author includes specific visual details like the mural, the still fountain, and the flour dust on the bakery window?
16. Which best describes the shift in Marisol's mood from the beginning to the end of the passage?
17. What can be reasonably inferred about Marisol's life in the years leading up to this bus ride?
Read the passage below. Numbers in parentheses indicate sentence numbers. Some sentences contain errors in grammar, usage, spelling, or punctuation.
(1) Every spring, the maintenance department at Hillcrest Apartments post a notice reminding tenants to clean out their storage units. (2) Last year, the notice went out in March, and most tenants ignored it until the final deadline in May. (3) This year, the property manager tried a new approach: sending three seperate reminders spaced two weeks apart instead of one single notice. (4) The first reminder went out in early March, the second in mid-March, and the third reminder went out at the end of March. (5) By April, nearly eighty percent of tenants having cleaned out their units, compared to only forty percent by the same point last year. (6) The property manager, who has worked at Hillcrest for nine years now believes that breaking a single deadline into smaller steps makes people more likely to act. (7) Whether this approach works as well for other tasks, like rent payments or maintenance requests, it remains to be seen. (8) Either way, the tenants seem to appreciate getting reminders that don't all arrive at once.
18. Sentence 1: "Every spring, the maintenance department at Hillcrest Apartments post a notice reminding tenants to clean out their storage units." Which correction should be made to this sentence?
19. Sentence 3: "...sending three seperate reminders spaced two weeks apart..." Which correction should be made to this sentence?
20. Sentence 5: "By April, nearly eighty percent of tenants having cleaned out their units, compared to only forty percent by the same point last year." Which correction should be made to this sentence?
21. Sentence 6: "The property manager, who has worked at Hillcrest for nine years now believes that breaking a single deadline into smaller steps makes people more likely to act." Which correction should be made to this sentence?
22. Sentence 7: "Whether this approach works as well for other tasks, like rent payments or maintenance requests, it remains to be seen." Which correction should be made to this sentence?
23. Which sentence from the passage uses a colon or semicolon correctly to join two related ideas?
Extended Response Task
Two community members wrote letters to a local newspaper about whether the city should replace a free public parking lot downtown with a small park.
Argument A — Letter from a downtown shop owner:
"Removing the parking lot will hurt small businesses like mine. Customers already complain about parking downtown, and many drive in from outside the city because there's no good public transit option here. A study by the downtown business association found that 68% of shoppers surveyed said convenient parking was a major factor in choosing to shop downtown versus at the outlet mall on the highway. If people can't park, they'll simply shop somewhere else, and struggling local businesses will close. A park is nice, but it doesn't pay anyone's rent."
Argument B — Letter from a city parks advocate:
"This parking lot sits empty more than half the time, according to the city's own usage data collected over six months, which showed average daily occupancy of only 31%. Meanwhile, the surrounding neighborhood has no public green space within walking distance for over 1,200 residents, based on city zoning records. Cities that have converted underused lots to small parks, such as a similar project in a comparably sized city two states over, reported increased foot traffic to nearby businesses within two years, not decreased traffic. A park could become a gathering space that draws people downtown more often, not less."
Your Task: Write an essay analyzing both arguments above to determine which one is better supported. In your response, develop an argument in which you explain how one position is better supported than the other. Incorporate relevant, specific evidence from both letters to support your argument. Be sure to discuss the strengths and weaknesses of the evidence in each letter.
You should spend up to 45 minutes reading, planning, and writing your response. Your response will be scored on (1) the quality of your reading and analysis, (2) your development of ideas and organizational structure, and (3) your clarity and command of standard English conventions.
1. Which section of this test felt most comfortable for you? Why do you think that is?
2. Which section felt most challenging? What specifically made it difficult?
3. Pick one question you were unsure about. Even if you got it right, explain your reasoning here.
This guide is for the mentor or instructor reviewing this test with the student. The goal is not simply to mark answers right or wrong, but to understand why the student arrived at each answer.
Section-by-section notes:
| Score | Criteria |
|---|---|
| 4 | Clearly identifies which argument is better supported and explains why using specific, accurate evidence from both letters. Discusses strengths and/or weaknesses of the evidence (e.g., sample size, data source, relevance). Well-organized with clear transitions. Few or no distracting errors in grammar, usage, or mechanics. |
| 3 | Identifies a position and supports it with evidence from both letters, but evidence use may be less precise, or discussion of evidence quality is thin or one-sided. Organization is generally clear. Some errors in conventions, but they do not interfere with meaning. |
| 2 | Takes a position but relies mainly on one letter, restates the letters without much analysis, or misrepresents some evidence. Organization may be unclear in places. Errors in conventions are noticeable and occasionally interfere with meaning. |
| 1 | Minimal or unclear position. Little to no use of specific evidence from the letters. Disorganized or very brief response. Frequent errors in conventions that interfere with meaning. |
| 0 | Blank, off-topic, or a response that does not address the task (e.g., simply restates the prompt with no argument or evidence). |
Note: There is no single "correct" position (Argument A or B) — both are defensible. Score based on the quality of analysis and evidence use, not on which side the student chooses.
Total multiple-choice questions: 23
| Q# | Section | Answer | Explanation |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Passage 1 | A | The second sentence of paragraph 1 directly states that the work 'was slow, costly, and physically risky.' No degree requirement, nighttime restriction, or ban is mentioned anywhere in the passage. |
| 2 | Passage 1 | B | Paragraph 3 explicitly ties sensor-detected temperature differences to catching cracks 'more reliably than the human eye alone' -- this is the only option describing a performance advantage over a person, not just speed or convenience. |
| 3 | Passage 1 | C | The passage presents the resistance neutrally, immediately followed by data on the technology's reliability -- it's used to show the change was contested and gradual, not to prove the technology failed or to argue for replacing workers, which the passage never suggests. |
| 4 | Passage 1 | D | Paragraph 2 states a robotic crawler 'could move through a pipeline while gas was still flowing, eliminating the need to shut down operations' -- this is an inference directly supported by that sentence, unlike the other options. |
| 5 | Passage 1 | A | The final paragraph summarizes this directly: the technology 'did not replace inspectors' but added a new skill set, and comfort with both traditional and remote skills is now the baseline. The other options overstate or distort claims the passage does not make. |
| 6 | Passage 1 | B | The sentence states comfort with both skill sets 'is no longer optional. It is the baseline expectation' -- contrasting directly with 'optional,' which signals baseline means a required minimum standard, not something outdated, optional, or a device. |
| 7 | Passage 2 | C | This sentence is explicitly attributed to supporters ('they argue') and presents an interpretation, not a verifiable fact -- unlike the other options, which describe what is happening (disagreement existing, a policy emerging, a data result) rather than arguing a position. |
| 8 | Passage 2 | A | Paragraph 2 states this directly: AI-assisted writing 'undermines the claim that the letter reveals genuine effort or personal voice.' The other options are not stated anywhere in the passage. |
| 9 | Passage 2 | D | Paragraph 3 directly flags this limitation in its final clause. The other options are not stated in the passage and are not supported by it. |
| 10 | Passage 2 | B | The final paragraph argues a cover letter only makes sense as a test 'if a job requires strong writing skills.' The other three roles (copywriter, technical writer, grant writer) inherently require writing; equipment operation does not, matching the welder/machinist example used earlier in the passage. |
| 11 | Passage 2 | A | The passage presents supporter and critic viewpoints in balance, plus a middle-ground policy, ending on a broader question about what hiring should measure -- it does not argue for elimination, give instructions, or claim AI has 'ruined' hiring. |
| 12 | Passage 2 | C | Calling cover letters 'old-fashioned and unnecessary' is a value judgment / opinion. The other three options describe things the passage states as having occurred, not judgments. |
| 13 | Passage 3 | D | Paragraph 1 describes 'a ripple of irritation' with specific examples (sighs, a muttered complaint, checking a phone), which is mild irritation -- not excitement, anger at the driver, or total indifference. |
| 14 | Passage 3 | A | The sentence explicitly compares her younger, more observant self to a coat that's 'technically still there but might as well not exist' -- a figurative statement about a dormant part of her identity, not a literal coat. |
| 15 | Passage 3 | C | These details directly embody the 'noticing' Marisol describes wanting to reclaim in paragraph 3 -- they are concrete examples of exactly the kind of observation the story centers on, not safety information, directions, or a moving subplot. |
| 16 | Passage 3 | B | She begins on an unremarkable, memorized route and ends 'almost laughing,' having had a reflective realization about noticing things -- this matches a shift from routine to quiet reflection/amusement, not fear, anger, or confusion. |
| 17 | Passage 3 | A | Paragraph 3 states the noticing version of herself went missing 'between two jobs and a daughter to raise alone' -- directly supporting that responsibilities consumed her attention, while the other options have no textual support. |
| 18 | Grammar/Editing | B | The subject 'department' is singular, so the verb must agree: 'posts,' not 'post.' None of the other changes are required by any grammar rule. |
| 19 | Grammar/Editing | C | "Seperate" is a common misspelling; the correct spelling is "separate." The other changes are not required. |
| 20 | Grammar/Editing | A | As written, the sentence has no main verb ("having cleaned" is a participle phrase, not a complete predicate). Changing it to "had cleaned" creates a grammatically complete sentence with proper past-perfect tense for an action completed before a past reference point. |
| 21 | Grammar/Editing | D | The phrase "who has worked at Hillcrest for nine years" is a nonrestrictive clause that must be set off by commas on both sides; a comma is missing after "years" to close the clause before "now believes." |
| 22 | Grammar/Editing | B | As written, the sentence has a redundant subject ("Whether this approach works...it remains to be seen" awkwardly duplicates the subject). Removing "it" creates a grammatically correct sentence: "Whether this approach works as well for other tasks...remains to be seen." |
| 23 | Grammar/Editing | C | Sentence 3 uses a colon correctly to introduce an explanation/elaboration of "a new approach." The other sentences listed do not contain a colon or semicolon at all. |